Originally Posted by
Lat'
See, Fleshbows? You're not the only one that was looking like bullshit ever since I started you!
Alright, let my filthy ribbons get deep into that, as I see you're beginning, I'm not gonna be harsh, don't worry.
By what the incompetant spriter I am can tell, there are some problems when comparing her sprite to her reference:
-Firstly her ears are looking way too small, don't be affraid about making them higher!
-Her eyes are too spaced, try making them like in the reference!
-The cyan fur thingy is missing, kinda.
-Her head in general is too much horizontally squashed; make it few pixels higher.
-Her belly is kinda fat, it should be closer to the reference, again.
EDIT: Also what is her size? Here she's looking like half a Sonic (or a Sylveon), is she meant to be that small?
The sprite in general would need some shadding and anti-aliasing, this would only make it look better.
Hope that I helped, you'll also need some serious dedication if you want to suceed making a somewhat good character WAD because of the ammount of frames needed, I've been (and am still) working on Sylveon for over a month. I would gladly send an edit of your sprite for you to get something to base on but I'm not on my computer, sorry, I'll do my best to give you something to continue on tomorrow.