Trying to get the manga face properly

I was trying to mix up a lot of stuff in this one drawing, the character (Original do not steal) is turning away from us but still looking at you, and I tried to do this facial expression where she's like worried but trying to hide it.
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Pretty good. I serioulsy gotta draw the eyes right..I always screw them up

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Originally Posted by Gen

I was trying to mix up a lot of stuff in this one drawing, the character (Original do not steal) is turning away from us but still looking at you, and I tried to do this facial expression where she's like worried but trying to hide it.
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You have to make her face tilted down more, make her eyes more shifted to the viewer while her head is literally sideways or downward.

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Originally Posted by STCPhoton

You have to make her face tilted down more, make her eyes more shifted to the viewer while her head is literally sideways or downward.

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Thank you for pointing that out, I knew something was wrong with it, but I don't mind it that much since it's like my 4th drawing or something. But anyway I took what you said in consideration and made a rather 'realistic' looking one while fixing the problems with the old one.
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Originally Posted by Gen

Thank you for pointing that out, I knew something was wrong with it, but I don't mind it that much since it's like my 4th drawing or something. But anyway I took what you said in consideration and made a rather 'realistic' looking one while fixing the problems with the old one.
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That looks really nice.